Generally I think that you've given Tifa a lot of emotional depth and also a flair that really brings her to life, which I like a lot, but one thing that I noticed in your posts is that she tends to think "Oh, Shiva" or ... something along those lines, in place of a curse. This isn't something I remember the FFVII characters actually doing, and while it's a small thing, it's kind of jarring for me to read, just because it doesn't really match Tifa's speech patterns as I remember them. You are doing a nice job overall, though. That's just one thing I'd suggest working on. :|b