Well, the point was kind of that the misunderstandings make you go "oh god, no!" so I think you succeeded in that sense. 8D
I'm pretty sure that you pulled it off just fine, though! You don't need to worry about it, since it all flowed and I found it easy to follow.
That's a pretty cute idea, and yeah, I could totally see her doing this, so. :3
The cabbage thing was just hilarious, what can I say? Sometime you just have to roll with it if the idea is good enough, so I'm glad you that you kept it in! AND DON'T APOLOGIZE, I'm thrilled that Guy was in this fic and you did great with him, seriously!
We will definitely have to plan for that. And you didn't fail!
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I'm pretty sure that you pulled it off just fine, though! You don't need to worry about it, since it all flowed and I found it easy to follow.
That's a pretty cute idea, and yeah, I could totally see her doing this, so. :3
The cabbage thing was just hilarious, what can I say? Sometime you just have to roll with it if the idea is good enough, so I'm glad you that you kept it in! AND DON'T APOLOGIZE, I'm thrilled that Guy was in this fic and you did great with him, seriously!
We will definitely have to plan for that. And you didn't fail!