I think I said this before to you, but your Badd is EXCELLENT. Your version of him feels like he was lifted right out of AAI, from his voice to his actions and gestures. He's appropriately gruff and gritty and no-nonsense, without being erring too far in that direction. His motivations and feelings come through very strong through his prose and dialogue. Plus, his non-canonmate interactions are wonderful... the threads with Javert and Niikura coming to mind as great examples.

So... nothing I can think of that needs to be improved on, but a great deal that you're doin' rite'. <3