Oh, I see. Yeah, so more grammar/typo stuff it looks like. I normally don't relook over my posts once I hit submit so that's probably that problem. XD I should probably at least reread over them once. =P
The sentence fragment stuff I do on purpose to show emotions, usually if the character is in a broken/unstable frame of mind, which, LMAO, Albedo is about half the time. So that might be a continuing readability problem, but I think it gets the point I'm trying to show across as well.
Basically, though, I will start paying more attention to what I'm typing. I normally just punch these out and go, so I'll try to add it a little more effort. Thank you for taking the time to comment to me. =)
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The sentence fragment stuff I do on purpose to show emotions, usually if the character is in a broken/unstable frame of mind, which, LMAO, Albedo is about half the time. So that might be a continuing readability problem, but I think it gets the point I'm trying to show across as well.
Basically, though, I will start paying more attention to what I'm typing. I normally just punch these out and go, so I'll try to add it a little more effort. Thank you for taking the time to comment to me. =)