That was beautiful, dude. You're so amazing at writing Usopp and keeping him perfectly IC, especially during really serious, sad situations like these. I think everyone's reactions to learning about The Big Fight were spot on, and I loved the imagery you used through out the story, particularly with the sword looming over him, hanging by a string, ready to fall at any moment. That really sums up how things were/are between Usopp and Luffy, I think, and you did a really great job illustrating how complicated their relationship really is. *_* I enjoyed your portrayal of Luffy, too. Very IC. 8D Also, UsoLu = win.
Thank you for writing this! Love love love love! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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That was beautiful, dude. You're so amazing at writing Usopp and keeping him perfectly IC, especially during really serious, sad situations like these. I think everyone's reactions to learning about The Big Fight were spot on, and I loved the imagery you used through out the story, particularly with the sword looming over him, hanging by a string, ready to fall at any moment. That really sums up how things were/are between Usopp and Luffy, I think, and you did a really great job illustrating how complicated their relationship really is. *_* I enjoyed your portrayal of Luffy, too. Very IC. 8D Also, UsoLu = win.
Thank you for writing this! Love love love love! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥